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You Smile

August 19, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

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I stared at you the whole time.
The music stopped.
I clapped.Loud.
As you leave with the rest of the court,
I catch your eye.
You smile.

People crowd the dance floor.
I sit at the table drinking my soda.
I get up to go dance.
You jump up in front of me.
You smile.

"Hi." you say.
"Hi. I reply.
You did great."
I say right in your ear
so you can hear me over the loud music.
" Thanks."
"Um..."
"Hey
I have to go get ready for the next dance.
I'll catch you later." you say.
You give me the best hug.
I blush.
"Bye." you say.
You smile.

© Kelly D., Phoenix, AZ

The author's comments:
i picked the picture that i did because it was one of the only ones i could find where a boy and a girl are crying... i don know the people but you know... let me know what you think!!
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