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August 22, 2010
By punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
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punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
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"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."
Kurt Cobain

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Together forever
Just another never
Why did you go this far?
We could have been a star
A perfect little star
We would of gone far
But you couldn't look past that bar

© Anna B., Northville, MI

The author's comments:
My Best friend and her bf broke up. Neither of them could work it out, on both their parts. So I wrote this.
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