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Beautiful Looks Lost

July 15, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


Beautiful looks lost,
Important looks monstrous,
Deadly looks beautiful,
Nails, shards of ice,
Hope to tear,
Hope to claw at,
The window pain.
Heart with steel,
Company's proud,
Look what you've done!
Look what you've done!
Tears now,
Too late, too late,
Look what you've done.
Look what you've done.
Make me proud,
It says,
But where's,
The voice?
Lost,
Lost is the voice,
Lost, found?!
No.
Lost in the oil,
Lost in its blood,
Lost in tin mind,
Forever.
Get me back,
Swell the swollen,
Balance of power,
With what?
Knife.
Shiny glint.
Help.



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on Sep. 9 2010 at 10:07 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Maybe u just dont know it yet :)

on Sep. 9 2010 at 10:06 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

I mean ur def an amazing writer!!!

on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:42 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou so much!!!!

on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:24 pm
wow i love this. simply love this. i'm speechless i cant describe how great and worded this poem is . Keep up the good work :)

on Aug. 20 2010 at 7:11 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

What do you mean I do? I don't exactly understand you here.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 12:36 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 10:35 pm
liv.laf.love13 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
MUSIC IS THE CURE!!

wow! nothing can describe how wo nderful this is all of your writing pieces r just awesome

on Aug. 18 2010 at 9:43 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

U do!!!     

on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:15 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

you have a good writing style. I wish I had a good one. :/

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:17 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!! :)

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:17 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:16 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:58 pm
Angelica Huitzil PLATINUM, Wilsonville, Oregon
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This is really good i love reading your poems:)))

on Aug. 18 2010 at 4:13 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson

youre a really good writer

on Aug. 17 2010 at 8:30 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

Beautiful!