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Blades
July 25, 2010
As u dragged the blade across ur wrist praying for courage to press down,
u realized its not worth it and u through it down,
Whats the point of ending ur life when u don't know whats in store,
all the things u could do all the people u could help,
and yet u still get the urge to cut ur wrists,
u see the blood start oozing and u get scared and throw it down again,
u don't know when u'll get the courage but ur hoping it'll be soon,
U can't take life it's too long of a walk u dont know what to do...
© Christina W., Towson, MD
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This article has 13 comments.
CandiceLauren17 GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 9:16 am
Pretty emotional there m'love, but it's great job:D<3
Vanessa said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 5:20 pm
wow this almost made me cry great meaning
Damara...C GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 3:03 pm
thanks see i am used to msn slang and i had this wrote on my computer for awhile and i forgot to write it right lol if that makes sense
ForeverFelix PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:06 pm
Haha, well, the whole "u" instead of "you" thing should be changed at least...and you used "through" instead of "threw" too. =)
Damara...C GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:56 am
is there anyway i could fix it up without getting it approved again and there is such thing as poetic lisense so does it really matter??=) and thanks
ForeverFelix PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 7:33 am
Great Job! But as A.Dreamer said, you should definitely fix up the grammar. Keep writing!
Damara...C GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:18 pm
thankyou = )
Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 7:25 pm
I liked the meaning of this, and I thought it was very well written! If you fixed up the grammar, it would be absolutely amazing! Good job writing this!
Escapethefate GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 4:30 pm
okay! I will!
Damara...C GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:40 pm
thanl you so much i appreciate u reading my stuff i am waiting on 7 other things to be accepted now two short stories and five free verse poems check them out
cindywindy said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 3:29 pm
Loves this :)
Escapethefate GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:01 am
This is really good, and it has good meaning to it! You can write!
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Greeeeat. (:
Just pick up your grammar and it's good to goo~