Stranger | Teen Ink


June 14, 2010
By Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

I feel you watching me
I glance back every second
You can envy me
But its gonna get old I reckon

Your in the sky
Your in the long grassy plain
My oh my
I wish I knew your name

Too bad for me
I will never know
Your the only one who can see
The only one ill show

Ill show everything to you
Because you are always there
Youll even know when im blue
And let your eyes, never tear

The author's comments:
Just that feeling that most people have when someone is watching over them

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on Jan. 1 2011 at 1:01 am
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

The rhyming here really worked out for you! I love love love the ending. I like how you described the feeling of someone watching over you. Oh yeah, and remember to use apostrophes when writing the word 'I'll.'