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Echoes

June 24, 2010
By Stargirl212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Stargirl212 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter how dark the sky, you'll always have the stars."

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You're screaming at me
cursing my name
but all I hear
is ringing.

What did I
do wrong?
I love you.
don't you love me back?

A single word
breaks me
out of my
trance.

Over.

that final word
rings like a commandment
echoing in nonexistent spaces
"over."

That note
holds forever
an endless second
into eternity.

and when the note dies
so do I
my heart shattered
like your love for me.

© JiaQi B., Paradise Valley, AZ

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