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July 19, 2010
By Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

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When I look up at the stars at night, I think about you...
The way you make me feel,
and our future together.
Your everything I could ever want and so much more.
Your blue eyes put me into a trance that is hard to escape,
I've never seen eyes so gorgeous.
Your touch sends chills through out my body.
Your voice is a soothing sound that always calms me down.
The word to describe it is perfect.
Theres nothing better,
It just feels right.

© Danielle C., Enumclaw, WA

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Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 1:10 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thanks so much, That means alot!! And I I will surely check out your work!! :)
brysmarie12 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:12 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
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I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I&#039;m writing in pen and can&#039;t erase my mistakes.

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Oh my goodness I love this! :) It's easy to relate to, nice job! Maybe you could check out some of my work? I love the feedback and advice!
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:50 pm
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awwww how cute, i kinda have a poem like this
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:56 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thank you  so much!!! It means alot. And I would be glad to read your work. /) Thanks again :)
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on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:39 pm
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I loved it - it describes where I'm at PERFECTLY but his eyes are brown :) Anyway, about this poem - "The word to describe it is perfect."

Could you check out my stuff? Thanks so much and keep writing

Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:17 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thanks!!! :)
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i loved it realy deep
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:11 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thanks so much!!! And I will definately read and comment on your work. I would love to get your opinion on my other work if youd be ok with that... THANKS AGAIN!!! :)
crubs33 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 11:58 pm
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Wow i love the emotion!! its so powerful!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:43 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thanks so much! :)
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:39 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thanks... Yea I usually like to write longer ones but sometimes I just get stuck lol :)
-Mz.S- SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:39 pm
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Amazing poem. (:
lily_says_rawr GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:31 pm
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This poem is really pretty. I don't usually like poems this short, but I like this one.
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:48 pm
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Sure thing :D
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:18 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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lol if you get the chance you should read some of my other works. I would love to get your opinion on them as well. :)
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:11 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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THANKS!!! that really means a lot.. :)
christin.bass SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:51 am
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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It's beautiful. (:
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:18 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I ment like if you wanted to make it better XD lol! your welcome :)
Lovebug07 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 12:31 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Thank you!!! :) and i see wat your saying I'm gonna have to work on it LOL
alaskatrailmutt said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:43 am
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I like it, I think you could expand apon it you where getting somewhere!!! :D Nice job!