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It was good.
Could have definitely added more detail and made it longer.
This is very good!
I'd suggest using more grammar throughout your writing though. It provides useful pauses for your readers. As I was reading this, I wasn't sure where to stop reading, or where to continue to let the flow go. This caused me to have to re-read it a bit, which made it slightly confusing and took away from the piece.
Good work! Keep it up! Send me a message when you have some new work up, and I'll come back to comment.
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-Nikki
