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Unnamed Flame
May 3, 2010
Lighter, lights her on fire, lights are on fire, with a smaller flame the passion’s just the same, just as strong, strength, the way we’re liftin weight of the world, dropped in pain, pain-t and Wayne paintings display the world in pain, that girl in flames, a whirl wind phase. Nothing makes sense, always felt empty so full of mistakes, broken, she bakes in the heat left to fade in defeat. Lost a name once you’re beat, charred like black coal, bars black and cold, left torn, old clothes, old, close.
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This article has 16 comments.
Meganchristine BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 10:07 pm
You're about as good as you believe you are.. Keep writing Don't lose hope even if no one comments
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:40 pm
This is very unique! I really like it. You have some good emotion in there, as well as a great imagination, and great thinking.
Good job! :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:35 pm
I loved it:) It was very emotional and descriptive nice work:)
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:06 pm
Wow, I love it, I love the unusual way the words flow together. It's unique. You are very talented.
kristin19 said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:31 am
THAT WAS GREAT. (:
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:26 am
yes yes:)) i sense the imagination n i feel the expressiveness in this, like the comment below:) i totally loved ur word choice^^ it was a very emotional piece, good workk
SnehaChatterjee PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:43 am
Gr8 sense of imagination, expressions n thinking, simply awesome!
ILikePersonificaition said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:11 am
your use of word play is stupendous, I love the way you do this. The way you move from one sound to another while simultaneously evolving your idea is incredible. this is one of the best poems I've read on here, I want to read more!!!
