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Heart Break

April 20, 2010
By ♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
♠♣♦♥Jon♠♣♦♥ SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
" The greatest things in life are unseen, Thats why we close our eyes when we cry, kiss, and dream."


Heart break
I feel so cold; and empty
Your touch was the warmth of me,
Disappearing slowly; as I fade away.
Memories glow like fire flies at night,
Never ever leaving my sight; forever.
You touched me; like an angel from above,
Brightening me; with each and every hug.
The tears slowly trickle down the side,
It’s noticeable; with no way to hide it.
I stay quiet; hoping no one will ask,
See this smile, it’s only fake.
Feelings grow; but quickly decrease.
You left me lifeless; with no room to breath.
There’s no fix; to this horrifying pain.
The more aches; the more breaks,
And I’m all alone; maintaining this heart break.


The author's comments:
This was from expierence, and I just felt the need to get it out on paper. And therefore I came up with this poem.

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on May. 8 2010 at 11:27 am
Quotes_on_Notebooks GOLD, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"We all die. The goal is not to live forever, the goal is to create something that will." ~Chuck Palahniuk

this is really beautifully written. i can feel what you're feeling through the words. great job. please read some of my work if you get a chance, i have a few pieces like this one

Caelo said...
on May. 8 2010 at 12:24 am
Caelo, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Nunquam Alieno mihi"

Currently feeling the same way. Spoke directly to me. Great work.

on May. 7 2010 at 3:52 pm
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Beautiful, must have felt good writing it out.