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why wont you mend my heart
why wont you mend my heart after you broke it in two
why wont you end the never ending silence even though its going through and though
their is a reason why i cant say your the one, the reason is because im scared
i am scared to let anyone in, to let my guard down because i will feel bared
im sorry i cannot say it ,i wont because you just proved that you arent,
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This article has 5 comments.
This is a really emotional poem, but I have a bit of criticism.
1. Your grammar. 'their' instead of 'there', no apostrophes, no punctuation, no proper capitalization...I know this is a free verse poem, but that really annoys me.
2. I think shorter lines and maybe splitting this up into verses would really help its appearance and rhythm.
Other than that, great work!
