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Demon Soul

March 29, 2010
By thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

You have a demon soul
Shot through the ground
Straight to the core of your hell
It disrupts my thoughts
My actions
My life
Straight to the core of my hell.
What happens now?
What do you do with your demon soul?
Nothing happens
And everything happens.
Everyone is affected by your demon soul
Though you do nothing to stop it.
Do you know that you have a demon soul?
Because I know you do.
I know it through my looking glass
Through my eyes
My ears
My life.
Through my hell
Do you feel it through your hell?
Your ears, your long boisterous tail?
I wish you heard the bang.
I wish you felt the thud.
But I know you didn't
I know you didn't even look at me
Because I saw you turn away
I saw you swivel your head
And turn your tail to me
And I saw you look
Straight into your demon soul.

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This article has 3 comments.

Susie Miller said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 7:43 pm
Susie Miller, Pleasanton, California
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i can really feel the anger through your words. like jill456 said, i love the concept of a demon soul. its so creative. great job

on Jun. 3 2010 at 8:02 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

I could go on and on about how good you are, but I'm afraid it would sound liek a broken record. This is an extremely individualistic concept, not to many people would dare use it.... but you did... and i LOVED it. :)

jill456 said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 6:05 pm
This poem is very original. What a concept that I have never heard of! A demon soul. You describe this demon soul perfectly and vividly. The ending is my favorite, when the person discovers his own demon soul. He looks straight into it. Wonderfully written. Another 5 star!