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Betrayal: the Worst Sort of Pain

March 24, 2010
By Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown


Wishing I knew who to trust.
Once upon a time I trusted my friends,
But lately I wonder often, “Do I have any?”
I say this because often do they betray me,
As though they wish to slay me.
In a way they do just that,
Because when they betray me they rip my heart apart!
It’s worse than ridicule or hate, betrayal is.
It hurts like nothing else.
I am sure of this…


The author's comments:
I wrote this because lately it seems that i have no friends, to say the least...but hey, life goes on!!! haha

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on May. 14 2010 at 11:36 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Thank you. I love your word usage while critiquing me. Thanks.

on May. 14 2010 at 8:58 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

you sound so sure and certain that everybody hates you. "it hurts like nothing else, i'm sure of this." this is very nice, concrete, and inspirational in a sort of diabolical way. 5 stars.

on Apr. 28 2010 at 10:59 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
20 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars -Les Brown

Thank you so very much :)

on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:23 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

I like this.  A lot. I've been there before, only but a few years past. It has depth... meaning. A great inspiration for poetry. Great job.