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Betrayal: the Worst Sort of Pain

March 24, 2010
By Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Wishing I knew who to trust.
Once upon a time I trusted my friends,
But lately I wonder often, “Do I have any?”
I say this because often do they betray me,
As though they wish to slay me.
In a way they do just that,
Because when they betray me they rip my heart apart!
It’s worse than ridicule or hate, betrayal is.
It hurts like nothing else.
I am sure of this…

© Geoffrey D., Milford, CT

The author's comments:
I wrote this because lately it seems that i have no friends, to say the least...but hey, life goes on!!! haha
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Starrlyt PLATINUM said...
on May. 14 2010 at 11:36 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars -Les Brown

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Thank you. I love your word usage while critiquing me. Thanks.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 14 2010 at 8:58 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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you sound so sure and certain that everybody hates you. "it hurts like nothing else, i'm sure of this." this is very nice, concrete, and inspirational in a sort of diabolical way. 5 stars.
Starrlyt PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2010 at 10:59 am
Starrlyt PLATINUM, Willard, North Carolina
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Shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you&#039;ll land among the stars -Les Brown

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Thank you so very much :)
KosuKovu13 SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:23 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
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I like this.  A lot. I've been there before, only but a few years past. It has depth... meaning. A great inspiration for poetry. Great job.