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March 14, 2010
By BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
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BlueFoot GOLD, Reston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Life passes most people by while they're making grand plans for it,"

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Meteors dissolving in the atmosphere
broke into thousands of millions of pieces
miles and miles above my head
careening through space
listessly, carelessly, pointlessly
I sat,
sitting beneath,
on a green velvet couch.
failing to see the big picture
painted by waltzing space rocks,
as she walked away
and I broke into thousands of millions of pieces too

© Leah T., Sewickley, PA

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i thought it was ok..but maybe somewhat meaningless. feedback would be appreciated.
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MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:11 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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This made sense a little. I think I get what you're saying. It was beautiful.