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Mistake
February 26, 2010
Falling in love with you
was my biggest, most brutal
mistake.
For all also fell in love
with it's opposite,
notoriously known as hate;
I inevitably fell for
your childish bait;
The truth is, sweetheart, I
want to be free;
I wanna be able to watch
the sunset fall lazily just
over the horizon and no
longer see your cruel,
guilty face smothering it's
beauty;
I want to be able to smile,
and truly mean it;
Looking into your hypnotic
gaze tonight, I know for
certain, in the very center
of my aching body,
that falling in love with you was just one of my many
harsh mistakes
© Julia S., Haddon Heights , NJ
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FlyleafFreak DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:19 pm
It just gets better and better, really good job, I can really relate to this one too. It's short, but there is a ton of depth. Amazing
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:31 pm
this has to be one of my favorites!
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:32 pm
haa no prob. id luv 2. thxx!! :)
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 2:43 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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