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Paradise Within a World

February 18, 2010
By G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
G.M.Palacio SILVER, Bayamon, Other
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decide to see beyond the imperfections.

In a world that I strive to be set free
In a world that I want to spread my wings
In a world that chaos walks among us


The key to heaven
The keyhole that keeps it protected
A pen and a notebook
My paradise


Inspiration flows like a river on the mountains
The feeling of fulfillment rises like the sun
Light overshadows darkness
Whispers of wisdom are spoken

I exist in one world
But I live within another
Which lets me be or not to be
Who I am

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This article has 4 comments.

on May. 19 2010 at 2:57 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."

Very expressive and relatable.  I really like this!


wpalacio said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 12:54 pm
I like your poems allot and i am not one read many poems >>>>> love you sis

BeatrizHD said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:48 am
I can't think of any poem I've read that I can relate to more than this

on Feb. 27 2010 at 5:10 pm
G.J.Velez SILVER, Florida, Other
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeoning of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.

~~William Hernest Henley~~


A true look at the mind of a wise person. Great poem