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February 10, 2010
By Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
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"Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless" CSI: New York

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I think back now,
to the things you did to me












Was it really worth it?











I guess we’ll have to see.

You first said you loved me.
I thought we were perfect together.
Those were the best years of my life,
I thought you really loved me, Heather.

We had some really great times,
Then you go and cheat.
We’ve permanently destroyed,
I have finally been beat.

I hope I never see you,
Your not worth a thing.
You never told me goodbye,
I’m glad I kept the ring.

© Tyson F., Honoka'a, HI

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yet another classic case of love gone wrong
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Poet4ever SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 4:12 pm
Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless&quot; CSI: New York

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i will put some of my more recent stuff on sooner, this was written two years ago, and so wre the others
me-forever said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 1:51 am
you don't need help of all things u need a bronze medal this was good as well as your other poems i have read and iw as wondering about the spaces as well i thought u ment somthing by it but i guess not but 1 thing i do want to advice is u need more passion in it it seems a little bland but still a good poem keep on writting :)
Poet4ever SILVER said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:03 pm
Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless&quot; CSI: New York

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Anyway, please help me, critizing constructively or complementing. I really need it. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poet4ever SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 4:45 pm
Poet4ever SILVER, Pocatello, Idaho
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Guilt by association is guilt nonetheless&quot; CSI: New York

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Why are some of the lines in my poem changed. and whay are there such big spaces?