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because you wern't at school today

January 28, 2010
By hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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i don't know how you are
or what has gone wrong
because you aren't at school my txts havent been answerd all day long
i worry because i love you
i love you and i care
i also miss you to
without you i am bare
i hope your safe at home
and not in any danger
with out you i'm alone
even i feel like a stranger
time goes by extremely slow
when i'm not right by your side
i only wish i could know
because worry makes me cry

© Kim B., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
my boyfriend gets sick ALOT but he normally txts me and lets me know whats going on. well i txted him in the morning and all day he never answerd back so i got worried and it inspired me to write this poem. luckily at the end of the day i found out that he was ok and safe
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jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 9:55 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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aww it like it :) it's got that romantic touch that i (probably most girls) love ;) very well written! LOVE it :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love your opinon :) keep writing!!
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 6:08 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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im a bad speller as well haha o_O
haleyy. SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 4:28 pm
haleyy. SILVER, Daleville, Alabama
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i love this(:
hollyhottell DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 3:54 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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poetry is a diary written out loud

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thank you. sorry im a bad speller
lafufu SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 3:03 pm
lafufu SILVER, Butler, New Jersey
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Aww this is cute. The poem is pretty well-written except "i also miss you to" should be "too". I'm OCD like that.
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:09 pm
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this happend to me one day, my best friend/on off boyfriend wasnt at school. his mom was very sick at the time and i was so worried about him, at the end of the day his mom called me, he was in the hospital he had cut himself to deap and way to many times. i spent the houl weekend on the hospital bed with him in the end he got out safe but worried us to death. but hey lifes a climb!
CaptainFabulous. GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 5:57 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
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i like this

i know when my boyfriend is not at school it feels as if the day drags by

good poem