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Darkness

January 27, 2010
By ShadowThief13 BRONZE, Colts Neck, New Jersey
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ShadowThief13 BRONZE, Colts Neck, New Jersey
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Enjoy life. Think of all the women who passed up dessert on the Titanic.
- Anonymous

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Darkness.
Stinging needles of water
Getting faster, faster.
The sky opens up.
The rain gushes from the sky,
Flooding the dry plants.
Boom!
Silence.
A blinding flash,
bright as the sun.
Darkness,
as black as pitch.
Light!
Flames consume a tree nearby.
Creaking...
Snap!
The tree falls,
Creating an inferno.
Destroying everything in its way.
The flames coming closer...
And closer...
They consumes the world.
Forever.
Darkness.

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LuvDove BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 1:26 pm
LuvDove BRONZE, Oceanport, New Jersey
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Even if you are on the right track, you will get run over if you just sit there.

- Will Rogers

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hey!!! i felt like all of your new work today and i got to say it's really good!!! lol... see you in music and french tommorow(everones favorite subjects!!!)
Nikiblue PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:17 am
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

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Great job, very vivid. Nice use of the descriptions. Keep it up (:
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 9:51 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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I LOVERED IT!!!!!! nice work!
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 11:29 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx