Daddy | Teen Ink

Daddy

January 25, 2010
By SMiCHEllEB* BRONZE, Dennison, Ohio
SMiCHEllEB* BRONZE, Dennison, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

When I took my first gasp of air, you were there.
I heard a loud hoarse cry coming from my own throat.
I saw you, and you introduced yourself as Daddy.

When I won my first softball game, you were there.
I smelled the satisfaction radiating through the summer breeze.
I remember you smiling so proudly and a sence of importance warmed my heart.
When I experienced the loss of my first boyfrind, you were there.
I wonder if my life would be different if someone else had taken your spot.
I discovered that if you weren't my Dad, my life would not be as special.
So with this, I am forever and always thanking you.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 2 comments.


on Feb. 3 2010 at 11:45 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1028 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

malgal3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 10:01 am
malgal3 SILVER, Uhrichsville, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I shall not condemn you for what you did wrong yesterday, if only you do it right today&quot;<br /> &quot;If you learn from your mistakes, won&#039;t you just keep making them?&quot;

Aww so cute! :)