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Perfect White

January 3, 2010
By Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
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Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
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"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams" ---- Dr. Seuss

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The thunder rolls, the lightning strikes
the carpet is painted white.
The rain pounds, the wind blows
leaves are what fall to the ground.
My tears are flowing,
they stain that oh so perfect
white carpet red.
They drain my heart like a drought
because you my dear have
ripped it out.
You said you cared, but I guess
you lied.
So let me cry so I can stain
that oh so perfect white.

© Franziska K., Milford, CT

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Diabetic_Wonder GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 4:15 pm
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
14 articles 11 photos 25 comments

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"You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams" ---- Dr. Seuss

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Naw, I'm not really that good. I just know how to express things that I feel with heart.
musiclover114 SILVER said...
on Apr. 25 2010 at 2:15 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
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Life isn&#039;t about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.<br /> <br /> born an original, why die a copy?

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no prob ur a really really good writer:)
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:45 am
Diabetic_Wonder GOLD, Michigan Center, Michigan
14 articles 11 photos 25 comments

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&quot;You know you&#039;re in love when you can&#039;t fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams&quot; ---- Dr. Seuss

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thank you!
musiclover114 SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 9:28 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
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ive been reading alot of your work and ur a very very good writer im sorrya bout ur diabetes as well please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!