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Times With You

January 11, 2010
By pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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"We all can't be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by." "In the end, they're just more words."

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If I imagine the days,
count the seconds,
or relive the moments,
they don't taste the same
as the first time 'round.
If i retell the memory,
frame by frame,
even the smiles,
it doesn't sound genuine.
I guess maybe its because
the time with you
are meant just to be
with you.

© Gina M., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
This is what I feel whenever I try to tell a friend of mine my special moments with someone else. I feel like sometimes I can't convey my emotions right.
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Ellie.M. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:53 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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wow this is really good keep it up.! :)
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 1:14 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
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So true...I struggle with this all the time. You really managed to convey the feeling well!
pampalooga PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 7:51 am
pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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&quot;We all can&#039;t be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by.&quot; &quot;In the end, they&#039;re just more words.&quot;

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thanks! will do :)
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 9:17 pm
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I love this poem. I really enjoyed it! You are a phenominal writer! Please, do me a favor...and keep writing. When you get the chance check out my opinion essay on animal rights/ vegetarianism