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May First

January 10, 2010
By phebbs BRONZE, Naples, Florida
phebbs BRONZE, Naples, Florida
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"color my life with the chaos of trouble"


it was the day so many promises were made,
the day my dreams came true.
you made me believe everything would be okay when you told me you loved me under the stars.

you probably don't remember when
you told me that i was beautiful
"not just because of your looks" you said
"but because you're all i could ever want"
then you kissed me.
and it was all okay.

may first was the day i fell in love
the day you started
to break my heart

you told me you were sorry. and that i was beautiful.
and that you didn't mean to hurt me.
really you were just too weak to tell me earlier that what we had was nothing anymore.

we both saw it coming.
our mirror of perfection had broke.
i'd just hoped that you'd keep trying for me,
for us.

october twenty sixth was the day my heart stopped breaking.
it was our end.
but it was just my new beginning



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on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:21 am
traveler03 GOLD, San Juan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Living is nothing. Dreaming is something.

this is really good! good job:D

phebbs BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:25 pm
phebbs BRONZE, Naples, Florida
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"color my life with the chaos of trouble"

awe thank you! it's nice to know that i'm not the only one who's ever felt this aha

on Feb. 15 2010 at 3:58 pm
goddess_of_the_moon_123 SILVER, Beaverdam, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
'To unpath'd waters, undream'd shores' ~ William Shakespeare, A Winter's Tale

This is really sweet and universally true. Keep up the good work!

phebbs BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:47 pm
phebbs BRONZE, Naples, Florida
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"color my life with the chaos of trouble"

Thank you!!(:

on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:36 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
20 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

Great job phebbss! It was greatt!

phebbs BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:02 pm
phebbs BRONZE, Naples, Florida
3 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;color my life with the chaos of trouble&quot;

Awe thank you so much! That means a lot to me(: I definately will! I didn't realize anybody read this.. ahaha

on Feb. 14 2010 at 4:47 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 430 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

Wow, this is REALLY GOOD.

You should definitely put up more!