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In a Moment

January 7, 2010
By ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

I can feel his gaze
burning through my clothes
making me uncomfortable
more than you could know

I think for just once second
maybe he truly cares
so i give in and follow through
and for another second

he made me his whole world
and in a moment less
all the magic that i felt
died within the night

I think about it all the time
and then i start to cry
why couldn't I have just said no
why didn't I say no?

The author's comments:
It makes me sed when girls let guys do what they want... Of he truly cares he will wait for the wedding night, not some cheap romantic night that will leave you in tears.

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on Nov. 23 2010 at 5:43 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
22 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to." Deuteronomy 15:10

I couldn't agree more with you.  I really loved this one, I feel as if so many girls can relate to it! Way to go!