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Dear God

December 6, 2009
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.


Dear God,
I want to let you know,
That the cross around my neck,
sends surety through my chest.
The bible in my hands,
sends a sense of safeness
to my gut.
The prayer floating above,
sends relaxation
to my reeling thoughts.
The belief in something bigger,
greater,
sends satisfaction
through my heart.
Thank- You for listening,
for believing in me.
Thank- You for always being there,
for watching over me.
Thank- You,
for giving me something
to believe in.
Thank- You,
for giving me the hope,
I thought I lost so long ago.
And I'm sorry,
for all the times of doubt.
I'm sorry,
for all the doubt to come.
I'm sorry,
for the sins I have made,
and the sins I shall create.
And I appreciate,
All
So many things.

Love,
A once lost child

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on Oct. 8 2010 at 3:45 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

: ) ThankYou.. wish i could read it : )

on Sep. 10 2010 at 10:24 am
TreeFrog SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.”
~Audrey Hepburn

This is amazing! I really love this! It's unique and inspiring. I have a poem called Dear God too. It's not on this site though.

on Mar. 7 2010 at 2:13 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Thanks Mindy :)

mindy123 said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 11:54 am
omg jen i love this one its one of my many favorites!!!!!