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It Creeps Up Your Back

December 2, 2009
By ericchristmas12 SILVER, Laurel, Maryland
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ericchristmas12 SILVER, Laurel, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If everyone practised being themselves, instead of pretending to be what they aren't, there would be peace." -- John Lennon

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You can feel It
It watches you
Glowing Ruby Eyes
Pierce the Back of your Head
You feel It
Creep up your Back
Societies Vampires and Zombies
Wanting to suck your Blood, eat your fleshy Brain
You can feel It
Wanting you
A passion so deep
It burns to a fiery core
In the pit of Its heart
By the way
It is a She
With horn Rimmed Glasses
Out of style
She is conservative
Stereotypically Nerdy
But watch out
She is also
Stereotypically Crazy

© Alyssa R., Pacific Grove, CA

The author's comments:
I got the idea from thinking of how like you have this girl in high school, and she isn't always the prettiest, and doesn't always have a lot a friends, but ends up having a crush on the star football player or something. Plus, I also got the idea for the crazy line at the end from movies like "Carrie" and whatnot.
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ericchristmas12 SILVER said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 2:35 pm
ericchristmas12 SILVER, Laurel, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If everyone practised being themselves, instead of pretending to be what they aren&#039;t, there would be peace.&quot; -- John Lennon

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haha nahh it's cool. I'm always like to hear someone else's interpretation. I could kinda see that though. But thanks for commenting! It's great to finally hear what another writer thinks of my stuff. But yeah Imma check out your stuff. =D
Marlyre PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 10:14 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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&quot;when you cry, do you waste your tears?&quot; Madonna

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great stuff... for a sec i thought you were talking about Sarah Palin, no offense, haha, read some of mine?