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If you Love me...

December 2, 2009
By Anonymous

I want Diamonds
Big and beautiful
Spoil me
I want your Love

I want a toy car
Puppy eyes, yes. they work
Mommy please?
I want your love

I want a neckless that says my name
So i can say its from you
First Month
I want your Love

I want a car daddy
I will need insurance
Sweet 16
I want your love

Progressing yes we are.
Leading the world yes we are.
losing our sense of value yes we are.
This Is not how America should be.

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
Its the Holiday season and i noticed that everthing has changed. What do we think love is? Love shouldnt be declared in a dimamond ring. Is the ring worth more then our word? Every kiss begins with K. Advertisement is feeding us with unhealthy words. We are being bombarded.
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