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Looking at perfection

November 19, 2009
By flightlessbird PLATINUM, La Monte, Missouri
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Stars rythmically dance across a glassy surface.
Deep amber smoking into a light emrald green.
Rings around those amber hughs, etching into white.
Clear as a blue sky.
Hopeless as a lost cause.
Complimented by long lashes.
Strategically placed into pale sparkly skin.
Set apart from strong masculine features, your eyes are delicate, and perfect.

© Anna Y., St., Robert, MO

The author's comments:
i got inspired to write this poem while looking into the eyes of the man i have fallen for.
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