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The Lord Said to Me

October 22, 2009
By unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
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unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

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While asking for forgiveness
the Lord said to me
"you will not be forgived
untill you set your memory free."
Not knowing how to respond
or understanding what he had said
the Lord said to me
"go on, look through your head."
so i took a step
way back through time
watching everything i did
and hearing every line.
the things i saw
i could not believe
the things i heard
made me want to leave.
as i got back
from my memory alone
the Lord said to me
"are you ready to go home?"
i nodded my head
as i couldnt believe my eyes
and then the Lord said to me
"i think its time to apologize."

© Pan Sum C., Babylon, NY

The author's comments:
This is one of my favorite poems. I wrote this when I was not at home and was at a strangers place. I felt alone and thought that the only thing that could help me at the moment would be the Lord.
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reg93 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 6:21 pm
reg93 BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe

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I read this over and over! you are so amazing!!
Avalon,Liv GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 12:15 am
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

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im a big fan of your work!
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:07 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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WOW ! You know , your a really good poet ? This is amazing . Im a fan :)

 

isabel18 said...
on May. 21 2010 at 1:13 pm
This was really touching! Great work!
unbreakable SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 12:56 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

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thank you..it is one of my favorite poems..lol
mrmonkeyman69 said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 12:53 pm
this poam is awsome i cryed
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:28 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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This poem gave me chills...you are extremely talented...I love your poems!