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October 21, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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As i sit here and cry, im thinking you. Im lost and confused. What should i do? Ive been making it up as i go along, not a care in the world. Its time to face reality babe. What that means, im not quite sure. Theres gotta be a better way. Why does this hurt so bad? The pain never goes away. Its like a shadow, not always visible, but always there...wherever i go. The depression is overwhelming. Im staying alive for you. Whithout you, my life is meaningless. With each breath i take, thoughts of you smother me. I believe your love is real but how can i go another day without you? the loneliness eats me away. Theres gotta be a better way. I cant comprehend my helplessness. I dont understand it, but i love you and that will never change babe.

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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 1:14 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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thank you so much!
distant_dreamer GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 6:27 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
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"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

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Wow I really like this a lot! It has so much emotion and feeling in it! Great Job!!! 5 stars!
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:41 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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sure...why not
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:15 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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yay for being hypocrits together?
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 12:33 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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hypocrit!!! lol
Fredwardness SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 6:12 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Awesomeness my almost as awesome as me friend

Fred FrY
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:33 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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lets stop with the buddy...buddy :D
EHunt96 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:07 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Aww, this is very thought out, in a good way. I love the words you chose and everything. Great job! ;)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 8:01 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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haha no problem buddie :)
ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 10:46 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
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Hannah I'm going to give you my most heartfelt quote -- yes I said it, and came up with it. Heres how it goes and I help it will bring you a different side of things. Your poem was deep yet good. Well here is the quote "Life is at it's best when your happy with yourself and you can go through it in happiness reguardless of others decisions." And what this means to me is that you cannot directly control your emotions however you can control what you think about, which has direct control over your emotions. So work on thinking happy thoughts and eventually your emotions will channel over. Rate & Comment my poems please. Thank you.
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:20 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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lol... thanks for caring buddy :D
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:59 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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awwww...... :(:(:(:(
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:56 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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unfortunatly.... yes

I wasent gonna put it up, but i really like it though. i mean it could apply to anything.
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:36 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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Hannah,

Are you talking about the 21-year-old???