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October 20, 2009
By lizardqueen BRONZE, Alpine, California
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One tear, one word
a walk along a dark hallway
a look into the past of another
the meeting of two pairs of eyes
hurt,pain,lust,love
the intertwining of hands
the taking off of a pair of shoes
three simple words
a life before ended
a new one begins
commitment must come

The author's comments:
i wrote this poem about my first love. to me its about the ending of old things and the beginning of new. the rush of new love and the comfort that comes with it in time. And also the confusion and hurt that unfortunatly also sometimes comes.
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Hayz~Hardcore SILVER said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 9:39 pm
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
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&quot;peace on earth&quot;

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OMG this is the cutest thing i have ever heard.Ur poem is amazing and went straight to my heart it almost made me cry keep it up. If u dont mind pls check out my work and comment on it cause no one else has thanks id appriciate it soo much <3Hayz:)