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October 14, 2009
By LaNae McShirley BRONZE, Longview, Washington
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Everytime I hear your name I weaken,
I Feel like a part of me was shot,
I Can Barely Breathe, and you know you have this power.
So you use it against me,
to make everyone see,
Im like the puppet in the palm of your hand,
Only you can control the strings..
I dont know what happened to us,
I dont wanna remember anything,
Infact I wanna drink so hard your gone from my memory,
But im starting to think the only way i will get over you...
is To end my life.
and you have the power to make me.
Just tell me you love me one, more, time

© Francesca Y., Robbinsdale, MN

The author's comments:
This Is about my Ex. Six Years of Being together, and he ended it because of another girl. I hope you Feel the pain in my writing..
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