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His Heartbreak

October 4, 2009
By TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

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The words,
were a deadening force
They shot through his blood, to his heart.
Bullets,
so quickly,
the words shattered it all.
Hot tears trickled, touching his cheeks,
dampening his parted lips.
He wiped the tears,
the vulnerability,
from his face.
His lips closed
his eyes darkened.
Stubborn.
he swore to himself,
that he would never allow it to happen again.
never let anyone
rip his heart from his chest,
tear it to shreds
so easily
like a child tearing up an old drawing they no longer cared for.
Never would he allow himself
to be broken,
to be crushed,
to be knocked across the face with words like the ones
She had spoken.

© Shannon R., Playa Del Rey, CA

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WeetzieBat PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 7 2010 at 3:45 pm
WeetzieBat PLATINUM, Dallas, Texas
35 articles 1 photo 13 comments

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"OW! Stop pulling my ear! THIS TIME I KNOW WHAT I'M DOING!!!"

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Beautiful piece :), I really like it. It's so true about how people feel...you really wrote this well. I wish I could write pieces that well xD
TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:57 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

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Thank you so much!
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 9:32 am
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
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-Ernest Gaines.

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....amazing....(left speechless)
sunshine.dez. GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 11:40 am
sunshine.dez. GOLD, Hemet, California
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this ones amazing too;

all of your work is actually.

:]
KiraKira PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:52 am
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
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This is beautiful. Way to go!
AlexHeller DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 14 2009 at 9:38 pm
AlexHeller DIAMOND, San Mateo, California
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i liked this sooo much!! You should totally continue writting...i want more!
ninian SILVER said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 3:17 pm
ninian SILVER, Alexandria, Virginia
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i love this its so awsome please write more!!!
TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:56 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

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Thank you very much! i just put some stuff on teen ink and your the first person to comment on any of them! THNX! i wrote this when me and my boyfriend were borderline breaking up
alley_rae said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:15 pm
this is really good i just got broke up with and this is just how i am feeling i love it .... VERY GOOD WORK
TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 3:25 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

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Please comment and rate! thank you!