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Smile
September 11, 2009
you made me the happiest,
you made me feel perfect,
but good things come to an end,
and history always seems to repeat itself,
and one day, i hope to have the strength to let you, to let us go,
but that day is yet to come.
&& i simply dont knwo if it ever will.
people dont seem to see what we have,
but they never will because were so perfect when were alone.
and you know it,
adn you think about it evr night,
and i know you do.
i know you perfectly well,
i have perfected your every way of thinking,
andf you know me perfectly well, too.
I hope one day you will see.
You say you love my smile, but you've never really seen it shine.
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This article has 2 comments.
hanksa said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 7:07 pm
I really like this poem because it shows the feelings a person has for another. The words you used where perfect for this poem. When you said in the last sentance "You say you love my smile, but you've never really seen it shine." It shows how much you care for that person and the feelings you show toward that person
jferragonio said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 4:45 pm
Jillian Ferragonio
TeenInk.comment Posting
Poetry/Smile
I think this poem shows a lot how this person feels about another person and how she wants them to see how she/he actually feels. Some errors were spelling. Like wehen you wrote "knwo," and when you said "adn." I really like the last sentence in your last stanza when it says " You say you love my smile, but you've never really seen it shine." that showed a deep feeling towards this person. All around i enjoyed this poem.
TeenInk.comment Posting
Poetry/Smile
I think this poem shows a lot how this person feels about another person and how she wants them to see how she/he actually feels. Some errors were spelling. Like wehen you wrote "knwo," and when you said "adn." I really like the last sentence in your last stanza when it says " You say you love my smile, but you've never really seen it shine." that showed a deep feeling towards this person. All around i enjoyed this poem.
