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September 3, 2009
By choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

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You say you love me but i don't see it
You say you want to be with me but don't act like it
You say forever but forever isn't lokking so good
You say i'm the one but i don't feel like it
You say i'm different but i don't feel different
You say you're changed because of me but you still act the same
You say always but always isn't happening
You say were perfet but it doesn't feel perfcet
You say we're right but it doesn't feel right
You say i'm cool with your friends but they ignore me
You say your family love me but they don't like it when i come around

The author's comments:
The poem is basically about the stuff your boyfriend says to you but you see the exact opposite happening in your relationship. Its just telling the guy what you think.
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Kat2292 BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 4:04 pm
Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
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"If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0." ~Mark
"Life's like a novel with the end ripped out." ~Rascal Flatts

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I like the style you used here. Good job! I've never felt that pain (thank goodness), but I can almost feel it from this poem. Keep writing! :)
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:41 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

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thank you i appreciate the comment
shelterisland GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:17 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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i like it :) it was pretty good.
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 11:04 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

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thank you everybody who commented
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Vry Nice;) I like it:) u should check out some of my stuff =)
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:20 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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this is great! :) wow. i agree that boys can be the WORST...but hey, they make great subjects for beautfiul writing! :) you did a great job with this, and i absolutely love it :) 5 stars. check out and comment some of my work, i would love your feedback. looking forward to more of your stuff! :)
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 9:59 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

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thnx. i wrote it because of my ex boyfriend
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:51 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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This is really beautiful. Guys can really stink...or be awesome...I'm waiting on awesome. Thanks for commenting on my poen. This is way better. Keep writing :-)