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Frozen Moments

May 2, 2024
By JaxonT BRONZE, Timnath, Colorado
JaxonT BRONZE, Timnath, Colorado
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The cold South Dokta air

The excitement fills the car

After 12 hours of driving

12 hours of suffering 

our reward


At my Great Grandmothers apartment

As I call her Granny

The cheer of parking the car

Ironkly smashing my finger in the door


None the less walking to the door

Then the elevator

The smell of old perfume lingers in the elevator

In some way, I can taste it


Then I knock at the door

The door creeks open

As I go in for a hug

Joy fills the room

All I think is this is happiness.


So much more to come in Grannies life

As she will go to the great heaven

Also for mine as I learn about many topics

 None as important as god 


The author's comments:

This bit of writing is about me and my grandmother and a moment in my life that is so vivid. I believe this is one of my best pieces of writing and I hope those who read this enjoy it as well.


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