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Dusting Charcoal

December 28, 2023
By booksss_07 BRONZE, Oakville, Ontario
booksss_07 BRONZE, Oakville, Ontario
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Fear is creeping up on me 

silhouettes of my whimpering self shrouding me

I’ve become that spec of unnoticed light

in my own eyes I’ve blinded myself 

given hope and let loose 

the bewailing flower that I've learnt to embrace 

shoved against the wall, I’m befriending this solitude 

and now, I’ve dusted my face 

like charcoal on paper 

I find myself becoming a stranger in my own skin

yet, each dusk I hear myself whispering 

“You go, girl”

because, it’s in these shadows, these wounds

when my eyes are just about to shut at twilight

I unearth the valor I behold 

my labyrinth of trails that I’ve conquered 

and my fear, that’ll soon lie at my feet

in the depths of silence, my voice is a beacon of courage 


The author's comments:

"Dusting Charcoal" is a poignant reflection born from a personal metamorphosis. Once cocooned in solitude, I pushed the world away, afraid to speak, burdened by a harsh self-judgment. The verses encapsulate a journey from self-blinding to self-applause, a transformation sparked by the slow construction of self-esteem and the cultivation of courage.

The poem reflects a journey of self discovery, and embracing vulnerability. One of the most prominent maneuvers in the poem, 'dusting charcoal' on paper signifies a deliberate unveiling, a process of becoming a stranger in my own skin, only to find strength in that unfamiliarity.

This written piece is not just a poem, but a proclamation of resilience and self-celebration.


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