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How You Make Me Feel

September 27, 2023
By EMB00 PLATINUM, Hartland, Wisconsin
EMB00 PLATINUM, Hartland, Wisconsin
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You leave the most b i t t e r taste in my mouth.

You make me see the most a g g r e s s i v e of colors.

The lions and bears can smell the utter h o r r o r surrounding me on all sides.


That’s How You Make Me Feel.


When you’re around, I smell the pungent aroma of bile.

And when I see you,  I taste the sharp metallic tang of blood.  

When I hear your name, I almost faint.

When your voice comes echoing down the hall, I feel my body turn an icy blue.


And I want to run.

As fast as I can.

I want to run until I can feel things that are not you.


Until the tiny legs of the ghostly centipedes crawling all over my skin,

have stopped their taunting dance.

And those harsh colors I see are 

turned paler, softer.

Until I see the dark, dark purple blinding my sight

is clear as water.

Until my quivering insides

are enveloped by a soft blanket.


But that won’t happen. It can’t.

Not until you’re gone.


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece about the way someone who used to be in my life makes me feel, and how they made me feel when I was friends with them. This person had completely violated me, making me feel some of the most powerful emotions I have felt in my life.


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