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The Bluebell Field

November 22, 2022
By WillaTalbot GOLD, Apex, North Carolina
WillaTalbot GOLD, Apex, North Carolina
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The Bluebell Field

 

Behind the mossy gate, that lay just past the village


Ivy now concealing the once gleaming metal latch


He crawls under the rotten planks, earth becoming present on his clothes


Yet he fails to take notice, as the Bluebells are in sight


Quick feet take off running towards the azure bulbs, trying to make up for lost time


A sense of guilt fortifies in his chest, internally pleading that she would be forgiving


Fingers clenched around a sprig of primrose, his attempt at an apology


A glimpse of her castleton skirt flashes in the corner of his eye

 

 

She had been waiting for little less than two hours


Fidgeting with the fresh apron to keep her hands from idle


A quick glance over her shoulder induces another wave of disappointment 


For he should’ve arrived well before now


The floral scenery that had routinely brought comfort now failed to cease woes

 

Executing a decision influenced by despondence and irritation, she turns to leave


Just as she had began the trek home, a distant noise draws her attention


The creaking of wood sends a grin tugging at her lips


Although he had forgotten the secret entrance they had long ago discovered


A breath of relief escaped


She hadn’t been abandoned 


The author's comments:

I originally wrote the first draft of this piece months ago but ended up scrapping it before completion. Upon being informed of Teen Ink applications by my creative writing club director, I decided to give this piece another try. After some revisions and edits, I made something that I am very proud of!


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