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spring cleaning

August 23, 2022
By oiia5 BRONZE, New York, New York
oiia5 BRONZE, New York, New York
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before i met you 

the floorboards were faded, 

the chestnut dulled to a defeated dirt. 

floral wallpaper, slumped 

like a languished soldier, sagging 

from the weight of the year’s battles

the painted flowers wilted. 


before i met you 

foul fumes of forgotten faith 

filled the air, suffocating 

every breath i took. 

even the pillows laid lifelessly on the sofa

exhaustion splitting the fabric at the seams.


and there i lay

in the middle of it all

dust clouding my sight 

deafening silence clogging my ears

misery engulfing my mind. 

 

but then i met you. 

and even though

the floorboards were faded

the wallpaper was peeling

and even though 

fumes filled the air and

dust clouded your sight

you embraced me. 


and you, 

you helped me sweep. 


The author's comments:

Although presented as such, this poem is not about home restoration—rather, spring cleaning is used as a metaphor to represent the revitalizing, reinvigorating power of love. A spring cleaning is the practice of thoroughly cleaning a house at the start of spring—in many cultures, it is associated with the transition from a harsh, cold winter into a bright, warm new season. Thus, I chose this process of seasonal renewal to act as a metaphor for the similarly renewing and reinvigorating effects of love. Hopefully, this metaphor makes the ideas presented in the poem more accessible—though not everybody can relate to the feeling of having true love, most can understand the similar feelings evoked by a spring cleaning.


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