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Rainbows: A feel-better poem

June 3, 2021
By WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
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WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
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Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.<br /> <br /> A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings<br /> <br /> Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin<br /> <br /> A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt<br /> <br /> Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

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    Pull back the curtain

             To see

        The rain falling,

              falling,

              falling

         Dreary and grey

           as I look out

              Puddles,

                drip,

                drip,

               falling.

        Why must rain fall?

           Grey, wet, sad

 

     But pull back the curtain!

 

    See the beauty all around!

The sparkles of rain drops on the trees

      The sun, now peeking out

             RAINBOWS!

© Jane L., Classified, Illinois

The author's comments:

I don't like rain.

Everything is always muggy, and grey, and drab.

But I saw a rainbow yesterday.

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Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2021 at 1:34 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
26 articles 3 photos 284 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

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I like this, it shows that even in something that you may not like or that may be miserable, you can always find something positive from it.
WolfGurl PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 24 2021 at 7:20 pm
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.<br /> <br /> A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings<br /> <br /> Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin<br /> <br /> A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt<br /> <br /> Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

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@SparrowSun

It wasn't actually a specific shape, I just randomly made things harder for myself for no reason whatsoever

Now that I think about it, it seems to be a waste of time :/

Oh well
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 20 2021 at 9:49 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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what were you trying to communicate with the shape? i assume you were trying to say something bc you used spaces to center it.