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ALONE

May 18, 2021
By Anonymous

I am so used to being alone
That i dont mind walking alone on the path
That is meant for  two
Feelings like happiness and sadness
Doesnt matters anymore
You choose someone over me
So what?
Its doesn't mean my life's building will collapse
The only meaning it gives is that the paint
I was applying to the walls doesn't go well with the interior
Dont feel sad about leaving me or choosing someone over me
Because you are the only one hurting and being in constant stress
I am all fine
Because I am really used to being alone
Such mishaps are considered everyday events to me
This heart wont feel a thing
Even if you  betray it, hurt it , deprioritize it or even love it
Its all because i am used to being alone!
So dont look back with the hesitant look on your face
Because i am perfectly used to being alone!!!
Yes i am 


The author's comments:

They say life's a journey 

Yes it is but a really hard one and we all are pushed down on each step to the point that we cannot get up so its better to walk alone 

In that way at least we wont get hurt!

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on May. 27 2021 at 1:51 am
Seraphina05 GOLD, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Your past doesn't need you
Your Future does

@jbritomariani Thankyouu for the detailed opinion!
I reaallyy meann it ! I will keep it in mind and will review it!

on May. 24 2021 at 2:52 pm
jbritomariani BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
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This is pretty good overall, you did a very good job with the actual description of your emotions throughout this process especially just with the metaphor of the interior paint. One thing I would say it to actually emphasize the feeling of numbness through metaphor, I think that could be really interesting especially if you extended the building through maybe talking about how the building is beaten and battered by the rain so it slowly degrades but still stands.

on May. 24 2021 at 10:55 am
Seraphina05 GOLD, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Your past doesn't need you
Your Future does

@Lydiaq I hope acheive your goals and find the path you are searching for!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 21 2021 at 12:27 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.
--me

A sad n relatable poem.