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A Chill

April 29, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


My pain scatters,

Piercing the bone,

Chilling my heart.

I want to be good,

But I can't be.

All hope is lost,

But I won't give in.

The battle I fight,

Is one I must do alone.

For I fight myself,

The dark side of me,

So listen close.

Remember me,

But I mustn't let,

Anyone in.


The author's comments:

This piece is about that feeling of hopelessness where you think you alone must fight that battle and it's not to make you sad but remind people that when your being mean, think about those less fortunate and remember that some people are hurting and you may be hurting that person.


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on Dec. 1 2021 at 9:18 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks!

on Nov. 9 2021 at 8:08 pm
ForgottenEcho SILVER, San Diego, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When written in Chinese, the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.

Oh wow--this is amazing! You're a very eloquent writer. It expresses a lot of emotion while staying concise & simple. You sound very professional. xD

on May. 7 2021 at 7:23 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

@wondermahima Thanks! I work hard on these and I really appreciate the comments

on May. 7 2021 at 6:15 am
wondermahima BRONZE, Chennai, Other
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Dare to Dream Big.

Your writings are so deep and cool!

on May. 5 2021 at 12:51 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Yeah, it can be

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 5 2021 at 12:44 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 957 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

Yer right in saying that the biggest enemy you often to have to face is yerself.

on May. 4 2021 at 7:36 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks for the advice, I will take that into mind.

on May. 4 2021 at 2:10 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
197 articles 22 photos 1039 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

cool, you actually know what your writing abt and why(:
it is rly cool tho. maybe rephrase the last lines, its somewhat confusing when the end should be the most powerful and well worded part.