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My Moon and Sun

January 13, 2019
By WritingTheWriteWay PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
WritingTheWriteWay PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"They laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at them because they're all the same"(Kurt Cobain).

Ah, alas, my moon and sun

You are sickly without

The Earth, lease you 

Have not a hearth

Which to better


Stay warm forever?


Aye, you moon,

First- you were always closer

But darker and cold

You tide the oceans

When everything seems nigh,

You hold me still high.


Your bleakness 

Terrifies into submission,

Like a beaten kitten,

And I wonder still-

Why you are so shrill?-

Before you fill.

Your craters are time bombs

And I wonder if the standing flag will last,

Or if all of you is going too fast?

Your icy eyes hold steady truth

Your pale,

Shivering limbs

Line in rail-

Seemingly sturdy at first glance-

Tall stance-

Dark, tousled hair


I wish evermore 

You'd give me a chance rather than crack under the pressure,

Orbiting and orbiting,

Why not hold me

With something other than a predatory stare

From afar,

Still you are my star,


You are.


Ah sun, ah, sun,

Rise again 

For my moon is fair

But I know not if he 

Cares for the likes of me

Or just sees me pretty,

You are farther,

Yet you are always there keeping me alive,

But you burn.

"It's alright."

What a sight,

Thee golden sun

Oh yeah gentle one

Lights shared with everyone


And one!

And one!

Makes two!-

Oh please,

Oh please,

I do!

Warm are your eyes,

Though like the moon,

Are blue.


Evil Venus,

Restless Mars,

Uincomparable fading stars,

Go once- on once-

Go all and for all!


Sun, ah, sun,

How must I go

Around and around!



I'll love you soon.

I doubt as you

Find a "new clue,"

You clever-handed-coon.



Dance your joyful, silly dance,

Oh radiant chance!

You have me in a trance-

Let be known your stance,


With me, on with this chance!

The author's comments:

A piece about two chrushes I had at once recently, I went back and fourth lol

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