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War

November 10, 2018
By LeoBatche BRONZE, Paris, Other
LeoBatche BRONZE, Paris, Other
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Shell-shocked soldiers running around,

Piles of corpses sprawling on the ground.

Bloody bullets buzzing by your head,

How many of your friends are among the Dead?

Screaming superiors vociferating orders, 

So many privates dying to the mortars.

Weakening wounded waiting for a nurse,

While their injuries grew worse and worse.

And even though they were all brave,

All that's left of them is a grave.

 

Each of them was granted,

A cannon-shot being blasted.

Those who survived gathered glory,

whereas those who died gained a poppy.

And for the Dead,

Will a tear be she.



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on Mar. 12 2019 at 3:15 pm
LeoBatche BRONZE, Paris, Other
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@isabellapopa thanks :) , I was quite inspired when I wrote it

on Mar. 6 2019 at 7:47 pm
isabellapopa BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The best way to fight problems and to fight against war is through dialogue." - Malala

this poem was beautifully written and very vivid!


also, it would mean a lot if you checked out my work too! <3

on Dec. 12 2018 at 8:47 am
LeoBatche BRONZE, Paris, Other
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@McKennaMiddWrites unfortunately I couldn't... But I'm happy it was published on this website :)
Thanks for the positive review, appreciate that :)

on Dec. 11 2018 at 6:38 pm
McKennaMiddWrites BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Be good to people. And don't forget that you are people, too"
- Colin Wright

@LeoBatche oh sorry. I assumed you were from Paris, Ontario. I think it is really cool that you wrote a poem for a Commonwealth War Graves Commission ceremony. Did you preform the poem? I really did. The imagery is very vivid.

on Dec. 11 2018 at 10:56 am
LeoBatche BRONZE, Paris, Other
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@McKennaMiddWrites actually, I'm French :) This poem was written for a Commonwealth War Graves Commission ceremony in Paris, so I had to include poppies haha, hope you enjoyed my poem

on Dec. 10 2018 at 10:32 am
McKennaMiddWrites BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Be good to people. And don't forget that you are people, too"
- Colin Wright

I can tell you are Canadian due to the poppy reference. I am a duel citizen ha ha.

on Dec. 10 2018 at 10:32 am
McKennaMiddWrites BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Be good to people. And don't forget that you are people, too"
- Colin Wright

I can tell you are Canadian due to the poppy reference. I am a duel citizen ha ha.