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The Hurt

May 15, 2011
By ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
23 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over,
Smile because it happened."

-Dr. Suess

To you I will not lie,
Today I couldn't help but cry,
I'm so sick of the drama,
I wanted to run home and cry to my mama.

Every time I go to school there is hurt,
Nobody cares about me I'm just dirt,
I really try to hide the pain,
All my tears will eventually drain.

All my friends don't understand,
I need someone to hold my hand,
I need someone to guide me through,
I need someone to say, “I love you,”

This pain is just to much to bare,
I wish someone actually gave a care,
No one pays attention they all leave me out,
They just look away when I scream and shout.

Some people at least they try to help,
But when they walk away I hold back a yelp
I always end up ruining things,
I wish someone could see the pain this sadness brings.

I wish I could be somebodies number one,
I wish I could smile as bright as the sun,
Why do some many people hate me,
It just adds to all my insanity.

I act like I don't care what people say,
But I take it into account every single day,
Why are people in middle school so mean,
I know the teachers at school have seen.

I wish they could do something about it,
I feel like I'm stuck in a deep, dark pit,
There is no way for me to leave,
I'm all alone and left to grieve.

This is not the way I want to live life,
Its cause my heart way too much strife,
Why can't I just smile and be happy,
Why does my life have to be so crappy?

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on Feb. 8 2012 at 5:50 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I could totally relate to what you're saying. It emotional and a good feeling to write a poem about. A few grammatical errors I saw, a comma here and there would help it to flow better, and some minor spelling mistakes. Also, some of the rhymes are predictable, and seem undeveloped. Other than that I truly enjoyed it, as with all your poems! (I'm a fan of your work haha) And I was just wondering if you had time, if you could check out my work I'd really appreciate it!