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Love and Pain

December 22, 2009
By blanking_out GOLD, Bonita Springs, Florida
blanking_out GOLD, Bonita Springs, Florida
13 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Follow the leader, but not too close, just in case they fall.


Through silent tears that I did cry
You never once forgot the why
You said you loved me just the same
But only I did see the change
You held me closer than I thought
And guided me when I got lost
You are the only soul I told
And never once, did you fold
You stood up straight and tall and strong
That’s how you loved me all along



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on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:36 pm
blanking_out GOLD, Bonita Springs, Florida
13 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Follow the leader, but not too close, just in case they fall.

Oh my goodness!
I sure hope you are a real person because you... you don't even know what I've been going through and how bad i needed to know that their was someone else in this foggy world who cared a lick about Jesus Cristo. Excuse me for the mix of culture. I believe in Christ and everything but sometimes I feel so alone, like God is watching over me and making sure I miss every step and fall further into the ground, or something crazy like that. I have given this poem a good deal of thought... I think you might have been right. And though I don't receive comments from many people on site, I have hardly been received with a God Bless you anywhere. I am absolutely astonished at this moment. I'm not sure who you are, but I appreciate this thought so much. Thank you and God Bless you also.

Jingmei BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:25 pm
Jingmei BRONZE, Lincoln Park, New Jersey
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hey, i feel like this poem reflects something beyond human. Like it's about God's love-- forgive me if i'm wrong. Either way, it was simple and touching. thank you and God bless you!