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Fallen Angel

May 19, 2018
By Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
57 articles 22 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.”
― Robert Frost


I'm falling, I’m dying,
I feel like I’m flying.
Wind roars past,
These moments will be my last.

My final screams drowned,
By rushing wind all around.
My wings strain
Against the stinging rain.

A crack of lightning,
Has my heart rate heightening.
I shut my eyes,
Waiting for my demise.


The author's comments:

I was inspired by the series Maximum Ride! Read it if you haven't already! 


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on Jan. 16 2019 at 3:54 pm
Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
57 articles 22 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.”
― Robert Frost

Thanks! You should, it’s pretty good. I will!

WhiteWolf815 said...
on Jan. 11 2019 at 5:10 am
WhiteWolf815, None, Alabama
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Very nicely done. Kinda short admittedly, but you still manage to add enough detail to create a clear mental image. I may just have to look at this Maximum Ride series after all since I keep hearing about it. Please feel free to check out any of my works too!

on Jan. 10 2019 at 10:08 pm
Sophia_LaPalme DIAMOND, Loxley, Alabama
57 articles 22 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.”
― Robert Frost

@WolfWhisperer0911 Thank you!

on Jan. 10 2019 at 8:13 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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@Sophia_LaPalme Great job!