Time | Teen Ink


March 25, 2009
By cobainthedoors SILVER, Port Saint Lucie, Florida
cobainthedoors SILVER, Port Saint Lucie, Florida
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Time is ticking away
the clock tolling every hour
Making the last time I looked into your eyes a distant and cherished memory
I know I’ve lost you a thousand times before but this is different
Because this time is final
Which makes it unbearable
Knowing this puts everything into a harsh and heart wrenching perspective
A glimpse of a future missing a real and vital person And I know exactly what im losing
I will never again have you understand what I want to say without me speaking a word
Im losing the only one who has truly seen me at my best and worst but still stayed
You who have never failed to make me blush and make my pulse and heartbeat quicken
Is the one I’ve run out of time with?
We cannot be blamed for this
The world simply crumbled and we are just victims of the fall
It seems our time has come and gone
But time that is forever marked as some of best minutes, hours, seconds, days, and years, I will have in this lifetime

The author's comments:
This was written in a hour so I hope it's tolerable let alone good.lol

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on Apr. 24 2009 at 7:52 am
cobainthedoors SILVER, Port Saint Lucie, Florida
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Thank you ssssoooo much!!!!

You seriously have NO idea what your comments mean to me.lol

Yeah it's definitely real experience and also a headache inducing one.ha ha It's about this guy I love and who's been coming in and out of my life for four years. And our experience and how it's all ended( so far) :)

Shibahime GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 12:53 am
Shibahime GOLD, Cedar City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing is impossible, the word itself says 'I'm possible'!
Audrey Hepburn

Wow i really like this. Is it from a real experience? If so i know the feeling, granted it wasn't exactly permanent but close. Wonderful.