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Our Perfect World?

March 26, 2009
By Anna Bradley BRONZE, Daleville, Alabama
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Severed Ties,
Cunning Lies.
Locked up hearts,
And Suicides.

Beaten kids,
Drug Addictions.
Alcoholic parents,
And house evictions.

Strives for perfection,
Self mutilation.
Locked in basements,
Touched in places.

Shooting sprees,
Gangs at war.
What has become
Of our perfect world?

© Whitney T., Glenpool, OK

The author's comments:
Whats funny about this peom is that it just kinda happened on the spare of the moment. I didnt really plan it. I was sitting in my room, thinking about life, and all of a sudden words just started popping up in my head. I wrote it down and was surprised by it. I showed it to 2 of my friends and they all loved it. They really wanted me to post it somewhere, and I did. Here. So I hope all of you like it.
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shelly BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:16 pm
shelly BRONZE, Sanford, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Being unwanted, unloved, uncared for, forgotten by everybody, i think that is a much greater hunger, a much greater poverty than the person who has nothing to eat<br /> -Mother Teresa

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i loved it

it tells the story in four stanzas

this is wonderful keep it up